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Inspired by one of my older drawings.


9x12 sketchbook paper 6-ish hours of work

This drawing ended up as a parting gift for one of my teachers, Mr. Reginald Grenier.

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:iconhawkefyr:
Brilliant! You are an awesome pencil artist! My only suggestion is his mouth looks a bit odd; the top and bottom jaw are not very well defined.
Also, due to a stray line of crosshatch there's a part near the YinYang symbol of his tail thaty looks like it's separate from the rest of the tail (or just sewn on, like a Frankenstein).
But these are very minor, and I say again: Brilliant!! :clap:

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:iconsimply-dreams:
I think it's fantastic! Well done! The mouth does seem a bit off but that's the only thing I see that could be tweaked a bit.

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:iconyamislover:
Could be better, but I LOVE it! :clap:

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:iconbhojop:
Breathtaking! I like the tai-chi sign. >_<
:iconarcuria:
Good work on the shading and i like the composition. well done. =)
:iconchromamancer:
Very nice.
The composition and shading are great. It's quite a pencil drawing. :)

The scales look rather good, too. Anyway, I think that it could use a bit more contrast in some places. Without much contrast, some detail is lost around the back wing, and the bottom jaw. Just make sure you think in terms of light and shadow, instead of lines, and to be especially careful where you have two different areas that use a similar gray level.
:icontoti-sama:
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nice work, now i want to try that media to do a dragon too :D
:icondragonschest:
Crazy Good... :thumbsup:

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April 29, 2009
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