Brilliant! You are an awesome pencil artist! My only suggestion is his mouth looks a bit odd; the top and bottom jaw are not very well defined. Also, due to a stray line of crosshatch there's a part near the YinYang symbol of his tail thaty looks like it's separate from the rest of the tail (or just sewn on, like a Frankenstein). But these are very minor, and I say again: Brilliant!!
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I think it's fantastic! Well done! The mouth does seem a bit off but that's the only thing I see that could be tweaked a bit.
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Very nice. The composition and shading are great. It's quite a pencil drawing.
The scales look rather good, too. Anyway, I think that it could use a bit more contrast in some places. Without much contrast, some detail is lost around the back wing, and the bottom jaw. Just make sure you think in terms of light and shadow, instead of lines, and to be especially careful where you have two different areas that use a similar gray level.
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Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article.
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